Blogumentary: Editing, Proofreading, Beta Reading, and Rewrites

Now that the first draft of Crossover is in the books (get it?), it’s time to start the editing process. Or is it proofreading? Or any of those other words from the title of this post? What do all those words have in common, other than basically being synonyms for one another? Most people use them interchangeably, but indeed, they each serve a specific part of the editing process. Writers always talk about the importance of editing, and the amount of time it entails, but what exactly does that look like?  I’ve touched on this concept previously, but today we’ll get a little deeper into the weeds.

For my own projects, I break it into steps. I start by reading through and making sure the story makes sense. I look for scenes that need expanded, characters that need rounded out, and other major themes. I also look for obvious spelling, grammar, and punctuation issues that are easy to catch and quick to fix.  After that, I disperse it to my beta readers and let some outside eyes get a peek at it. I have them look for the same things to make sure my brain isn’t overlooking any glaring issues since I know what is intended.  Next, I go through with a fine tooth comb and look for any final spelling, grammar, and punctuation issues. This is the hard part because as the creator of the material, your eyes know what’s supposed to be there and are really good at glancing over things.  After that, I order the first physical copy of the book and read through it again, line by line to check one more time for any issues or mistakes.

For other works I review, I ask what the author is looking for.  Some writers feel confident in the material and just want another set of eyes to find misspelled words and unnecessary commas.  Others want to make sure they haven’t overlooked any major issues with the plot structure.  Are they only worried about punctuation, spelling, and grammar? Or are they looking for plot holes and pacing issues?  These questions fall into more specific categories of editing that I haven’t even mentioned yet (but don’t worry, I’ve basically already described them all, so now I just need to tell you the name for each process)!  Here we go!

  • Developmental editing – typically used when a writer has a concept for a story and possibly a rough outline, but still needs to fill in some gaps.  The first draft usually isn’t even completed at this point.
  • Structural editing – this looks at content, plot structure, and overall flow of the story.  This would normally be the first step after completing a first draft, and this is usually where the re-writes are the heaviest.  Re-writes fall in here, which just means going through and modifying/adding to what’s already there.
  • Content editing or Substantive editing – this is where the editing process starts to break down the content that’s on the page. This type of editing begins to break the story down chapter by chapter and paragraph by paragraph to make sure things are ordered properly and make sense.
  • Line editing – exactly like it sounds. This type of editing is going like by line, word by word, looking for run-on sentences, fragments, and word usage.
  • Copy editing – this is where editing really gets in the weeds. This is where we pull out that fine tooth comb for the first time and start looking for grammar, spelling, and punctuation issues.
  • Proofreading – this is usually the last round of edits, and this person is looking for anything the copy editor might’ve missed. The key difference between a proofreader and a copy editor is that copy editing is the last step before a manuscript goes to the printer. Proofreading is taking the first printed, hard copy of the book (usually called the proof copy), and making sure the formatting is correct and looking for any final issues with punctuation, spelling, and grammar.
  • Beta Readers – this part of the process can fall almost anywhere on this list, depending on the personal preference of each individual author.  I would encourage every writer to find a trusted group of beta readers.  Friends and family might be willing to read your work, but they’re all going to feel bad giving you critical feedback.  While it’s nice to hear how great your work is, you also need somebody that’ll tell you what could be improved.  Hopefully they’ll keep in mind the emotional attachment you have with your creation and be gentle with their delivery, but you still want to make sure they can offer helpful, constructive criticism.

That all seems like a lot, huh?  And yeah, if you want a high quality, polished, finished product, then each and every step above is very necessary before going to print.  So strap in, because writing the first draft is only the beginning!

Thank you, that is all.

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Literary Listening

Lately I’ve been enthralled by the idea of creating a playlist for my projects.  I enjoy watching movies and I’m a sucker for a great soundtrack, so when I’m building scenes, conflicts, characters, or anything else, I like to let my mind wander to whatever I think the most fitting song for that moment is.  (Plus I like to fantasize about the idea of selling the rights to one of my books at some point and having an actual soundtrack for an actual film based on one of my stories, but that’s just a dream at this point.)

As I’ve been looking for motivation recently, I’ve found myself driving around in my car, letting my music shuffle, looking for literary themed songs to get the creative juices flowing.  I’ve come up with a handful that I really enjoy, so I decided to turn to Google to find some that I possibly hadn’t thought of.  With that, I’d like to provide the following definitive literary soundtrack.  Several of these are obvious and well known, but hopefully you’ll spot a few surprise sleepers on here that you hadn’t thought of before!  Check it out, see what you think, and let me know if you think I missed anything in the comments below! Continue reading

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Exploring the Writing Community: Zombie Pirate Publishing

 

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Thankfully, with the assistance of the internet, writers have endless opportunities at the tips of their fingers. In the past, you had to mail query letters, purchase/subscribe to magazines and flip to the fine print in the back on how to submit articles, stories, or poems. Now, you just do a quick online search and get instant results to an entire community that you never knew existed before that moment. That’s what happened to me with Zombie Pirate Publishing. Unfortunately, I discovered them just as their call for a flash fiction anthology had ended, which is one of my favorite forms of short stories. On the bright side, they were just starting a call for a horror-themed short story anthology. I had a rough draft of a story sitting around that I thought could be a good fit, so I dusted it off, polished it up, and submitted it!  (Turns out it wasn’t a good fit.  Maybe next time!)

 

What I discovered is that Zombie Pirate Publishing is a small, up-and-coming company who is feverishly collecting submissions and putting out anthologies. Their focus from what I can tell is on quality collections, as well as acknowledging and giving credit to the writers themselves. They don’t currently pay for accepted submissions, but it seems like that’s a short-term goal that they are wanting to change as soon as they are in a position to. In the meantime, it’s always helpful for undiscovered writers to be featured in collections and gain more notoriety with wider ranges of readers, so there’s no question about the perk that comes with being selected for one of their anthologies.

They’ve built quite a community online, with co-founders Adam Bennett and Sam Phillips being both active and supportive on the groups’ Facebook page.  They keep their community engaged, and have built a nice base because of it.

I recently reached out to one of the founders, Sam Phillips, for more information, and this is what I found out:

The company started in February 2017 with a couple of old friends from northern NSW, Australia.  They appeared in anthologies together and wanted to take their careers further as well as help others along the way.  The next logical step for them was to apply what they had learned in order to provide high quality anthologies as well as other services and a home to up-and-coming authors.  The name Zombie Pirate Publishing came about from a card game which combines factions based on popular memes. They thought zombie pirates sounded cool, so adopted that as the face of their brand.

They threw themselves into the deep end and have produced regular anthologies since.  They are up to seven now that their latest was published earlier this month, with multiple others on the horizon.  In addition to the collections, they also produce various merchandise featuring their mascot, Pretty Pete the zombie pirate captain.  (Editor’s note: he’s not so pretty.  But he is pretty awesome, anyway.)

As already mentioned, through all of these efforts, they’ve created a vibrant community on social media for writers to network and submit to their anthologies with a goal of providing a friendly atmosphere for writers to grow and a place for them to get published.

You might think this would be more than enough to keep them busy, but they still find the time and energy to produce works of their own.  Sam is a prolific poet, in addition to working with stream of consciousness and some genre fiction.  Adam primarily writes short story fiction of all types and also has some novellas to his credit.  Their works have appeared in several dozen anthologies and magazines, but writing isn’t all they know.  It turns out they both know how to juggle, and Sam also plays drums in a death metal band.

Hmm, writers.  They’re an odd breed, amiright??

Hopefully I’ll be able to make this a recurring feature on my site and be able to discover more communities such as Zombie Pirate Publishing.  Have any tips on where else I could look?  Leave me a note in the comments below!

Thank you, that is all.

 

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Thank you, Marvel

Like pretty much every other person on the face of the Earth, I will be fortunate enough to see Avengers: Endgame this weekend.  And also just like everybody else on the planet, I’ll have thoughts.  Boy, will I have thoughts.  I obviously already do, which is why I’m here.  My plan is to keep this short and avoid spoiler territory (especially since I haven’t even seen the film yet).  It also just so happens to be National Superhero Day, so let’s get to it!

Now I’m not looking to type up another movie review that sums up the same material and talking points as every other post out there.  (Remember when I said I haven’t seen it yet?  Yeah, a review would be difficult then.)  No, I’m thinking more of the Marvel Cinematic Universe as a whole.  This is hardly a new observation, but with Endgame wrapping up this generation of superhero movies as we know them, I just want to look back at the enormity of what Marvel was able to pull off over the last eleven years. Continue reading

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Blogumentary: Books Vs Movies

 

We all know it. Movies based on books are rarely good, and are never as deep and rich as the source material. The author creates a story and characters that we love, and we can’t help ourselves but get excited to see them on the big screen. We know it hardly ever ends well, but we simply can’t manage our hopes and expectations.  That’s what makes a book worthy of being adapted in the first place.

But who do we blame for the disappointment?  Does the burden fall on the author, who’s responsible for creating the content, or the studio who writes the checks and has the final say?  Does the author have any obligation to be involved? What if they don’t know anything about the industry or the process? Story telling and screen writing are two completely different things. Or does their responsibility end once they cash the check?  That’s a whole lot of relevant, valid questions, and naturally, I certainly think there’s more than one answer.  Each scenario has its own quirks, perks, flaws, budgets, and people involved that all have an effect on the outcome, so let’s look at these questions a little more in-depth, shall we? Continue reading

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Blogumentary: Part-time writer with full-time aspirations

Being an author is a pretty cool thing. People are always intrigued when they learn that I write. There are usually a string of questions and comments that follow. Most of them are good, well-intentioned questions. Others could probably be worded differently and expressed more concisely. The second group typically revolve around the “I’ve thought about writing, but I have a real job,” type of back-handed comment.  I also have a “real job” that requires a lot of time and attention.  On the other hand, I also have an undeniable urge and desire to write, so I make time for that too.  Just like with everything else in life, it all boils down to prioritizing.  I value my need for creativity, so I account for that in my day-to-day routine. Continue reading

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The Kings of Chaos Motorcycle Club Series Book 3 Title and Cover Reveal

“Yeah, see, it all started when this dame walked into my office, see. Nope, just kidding. This isn’t that kind of detective story. I’m not classy or elegant enough for all that mess.”

The return of Will McGee! He’s toppled an outlaw motorcycle club, crippled a drug distribution ring, and dealt with crushing personal blows along the way. So what do you do when you reach the end of the road? You turn around and ride back where you came from.

When a new black and blue patch begins popping up around Rough River Falls, along with some all-too-familiar faces, Will is confronted by his past. Whether he’s ready for it or not. Throw on a rain suit, because the sunshine is over.

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